Excusive First Viewing and Feedback
After my short film was finished being edited, it was time to seek a third person point of view. It is fundamental to get a second opinion on any film or artistic work and it often takes an unbiased view to provide unbiased criticizations. A third person can point out aspects you are lacking in, as well as what you have excelled in. For my viewing, I chose my friend, Ariel Pierre, to watch and review as she was in A level Media studies lass year. She brings with her experience and knowledge in movie making that is ideal in reviewing my short film. So after I showed her my short film on Capcut, she started to give her critiques. Overall, she liked the plot twist and how it wasn't over stereotypical, but still was shocking enough to film the rest of the film. She liked the slow build up to showing Hoffmans face in the beginning as it made it more suspenseful. Likewise, she liked the sequence of shots that occur when Hoffman chases Reynolds as you al...